I almost apologize for my new-found love for section poems, but not quite. The title is not very good, and I'm sorry, but it's a shortened version of what was the end line, which I decided was too obvious to be in the poem, and, you know, a title is all the narrative structure a poem needs and such, so there. I am, however, open to suggestions.
Let me know if...
1. You understand how each bit fits with the over-arching theme, and what the over-arching theme is
2. If I should take out the first stanza
3. If you like the ending as it is.